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The Difference Between An Okay Story And A Good Story

7/05/2012

A few year’s back, Sam Henderson’s always entertaining blogsite The Magic Whistle ran a notorious well known 3-page comics story by Sam Glanzman called “Please Don’t Cry, Johnny”.

Lemme save you some time;
you don’t have to read the entire story.
The first two pages are padding,
all the info you need is down below…

 

This is why it’s an okay story, not a bad story:
It’s short, it gets to its punchline quickly,
it has a visually shocking enough ending
to make it stick in one’s memory.

This is why it’s an okay story, not a good story:
Because there’s a million and one questions to be answered with that last panel.
Who are these people?  Why does the father look like this?  Is this Johnny’s fate?
How do they live?  Don’t they ever have to go to town?
Will Johnny and his family always be outcasts?

This should have been the very first page of the story.  It should have answered all of those questions, or at least intimated at answers.

Then it would have had the chance of being great, and if not great, at least much, much better than what it is.

Bottom line:
Never settle for the obvious in your writing.

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Jack Kirby Was A Friend Of Mine

29/04/2012

I don’t see movies
or buy comics from
people who screw over
friends of mine.

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The Deserter by Boardman Robinson

7/04/2012

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What? Again?!?!?

2/04/2012

Ever a glutton for punishment, the always gracious Melchizedek Todd invited me back on his show The God Scene With Mel And Nicole, this time to discuss the writing process more specifically and how one adapts to Bible to comics, movie, TV, and other media.

It’s show number 7; my interview starts at the 24:30 mark.

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SERENITY: The Lord’s Prayer

25/03/2012

Found here.

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…And Now This

14/03/2012

I was also interviewed by What’s On Joe Mind podcast a couple of weeks ago; as you might guess they specialize in all things G.I. Joe related.  They just uploaded the episode today.  My interview begins at the 1:19:50 mark.

My favorite of all the Joe characters.
If I had my way, G.I. Joe: The Movie
would have been 90 minutes of
Shipwreck
on shore leave in Tiajuana.

 

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On Air & In Print

13/03/2012

I’ve been interviewed not once but twice in recent weeks.

Melchizedek Todd interviewed me on his Prolifick Radio show, The God Scene With Mel And Nicole.  My interview starts at the 24:43 mark on the Februay 21, 2012 show.  Topics include Serenity, Savage Angels, and other upcoming stories plus the Christian Comic Arts Society (CCAS).

And speaking of the CCAS, be sure to read Sara Napier’s in-depth article on the organization in New Identity magazine #14, available online.  She does a great job covering the history and purpose of the organization.

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Jan Berenstain (1923 – 2012)

27/02/2012

I’m sorry to learn of the passing of Jan Berenstain, who along with her late husband Stan were the Berenstains behind The Berenstain Bears.

The Berenstain Bears were a big part of my daughters’ reading when they were growing up, with me reading the stories to them when they were pre-schoolers then having them endlessly pore over the books when they learned to read.

Proteges of Dr. Suess, their stories conveyed an “old-timey” flavor reflecting their own roots as part of the Depression / WWII generation.  While some look askance at the Berenstain Bears for not being progressive enough, it’s fair to think of them as tales crafted by loving grandparents; maybe a bit old fashioned in taste and outlook, but always entertaining and always with a golden nugget of truth at the core.

But the Berenstain Bears are just half of the reason I love their work so much.  The flipside to the Bears — and as much a part of who they were as part of the WWII generation — was their post-war / 1960s era cartoons and books.

I first stumbled across the Berenstains’ scalpel-sharp wit & insight during the summer months when I’d visit my grandmother and aunt in the late 50s / early 60s.

Nona had a subscription to McCall’s magazine, and at that time McCall’s ran a two column cartoon feature from the Berenstains called “It’s All In The Family”.[1]

“It’s All In The Family” was an eye-opener for young Buzzy-boy.  I had seen lots of comic books and TV shows about families, but there was always something a little too perfect, a little too ideal about them.

The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s competed for bathroom time.  The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s had kitchen disasters.  The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s had pets that made messes.  The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s has a dad who walked around in his underwear on Saturday mornings and a mom who wore a slip around the house.  The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s had kids who got sick and didn’t make it to the toilet on time.

The Berenstains’ family in McCall’s, in other words, was just like my family.

Like I said, quite an eye-opener.[2]

By the time I was in grade school I was already reading at a 6th grade level.  When my parents would go shopping I’d make a bee-line to the book racks of whatever store we were in.[3] Once my parents realized I wasn’t going to wander away from that spot, they tended to turn me loose so they could concentrate on keeping my two younger brothers in line.

I was delighted to discover the Berenstains not only did “It’s All In The Family” but had also written and illustrated over a dozen books — “illustrated essays” as they referred to ‘em, tho it’s safe to call ‘em proto-graphic novels — on parenting and children and child care and adolescence and growing up and office politics and =gulp!= sex.

Eye-openers indeed!

Because while most people today think of the Berenstains’ in the image of the kindly grandparents described above, they were also part of the 1950s and they sure weren’t blind to what was going on in the 1960s.

And while I lost track of their newer works by the time I was in high school (love to find some copies now), they did quite a bit to educate me in the ways of the world, in the ways adults thought and behaved, in the way parents related to children, and in the way men and women related to one another.

They did it with humor, they did it with style, but I don’t think they ever hit a false note.  If they had I would have probably sensed it and never looked at another one of their books again.

So it’s unfair to judge The Berenstain Bears too harshly.

Jan and Stan knew full well what they were doing.  They had been through it all, had seen it all, but also knew how to dish it out in doses that wouldn’t be overwhelming to younger readers.

They were great children’s book illustrators / writers, they were great cartoonists, but reading their lifetime of work convinces me they were great people.

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[1]  Not to be confused with the TV show.

[2]  Mike Lynch offers a small sample here.

[3]  In the 1950s & 60s every supermarket, drug store, dime store, department store, bus stop, soda shop, and more than a few gas stations and restaurants had book and magazine racks to varying degrees.

 

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Copyrights & Corporations, Trademarks & Time Limits

21/02/2012

When the U.S. Constitution first addressed the issue of copyright, the world was just entering the mass-produced Industrial Age.  The clause (Article I, Section 8, Clause 8 for those keeping score at home) sez:

“To promote the Progress of Science and useful Arts, by securing for limited Times to Authors and Inventors the exclusive Right to their respective Writings and Discoveries.”

Originally copyright was limited to 26 years, with an option for an extension of another 26 years if the creator so desired.

The 18th century legislators who drafted the Constitution clearly felt few if any creators would live long enough to see their original work go out of copyright at the end of 52 years.

Well, times and circumstances change.  For one thing people began living a lot longer.  For another, corporate “personhood” allowed non-human entities to lay claim to work they had no direct input to creating.

Now, the concept of corporations — the original concept — was not bad:
A business entity that came together for a particular purpose for a limited period of time.

And once that purpose was achieved,
the corporation was disbanded,
its assets distributed among the shareholders.

But as the eminent philosopher C. Lauper once observed:  “Money changes everything.” Corporations bribed politicians to change the law so they could stay in business forever, and could in fact expand into businesses far beyond their initial prevue.

Marx wrote of workers’ alienation in modern industry, but that’s nothing compared to the alienation suffered by modern shareholders.  Shareholders, who often have invested blindly in mutual funds that chase down the best return for their dollar, have no first hand knowledge of the human beings working so hard to pay them their dividends.

Since they have no direct link to any of the businesses the mutual fund invests in, they don’t care how their money is made so long as their money gets made.

Corporations, hearing only the relentless drumbeat of “more-more-MORE” from the mutual fund managers, use business practices that would make Morgan the pirate blush.

This means, for creative types, that once a corporation sinks its fangs into an intellectual property, it’s never gonna turn it loose.

Copyright meant different things at different times in different cultures.

Japan was notoriously lax bordering on the whimsical when it came to copyright enforcement.  For a long time, any recording released in Japan had only a 20 year copyright, then it became public domain.

As a result, big non-Japanese acts were loathe to officially release records in Japan.  In a compromise move, they’d go to Japan and record a live album at a stage show, which would then be sold in Japan.[1]

When these live recordings went P.D.  in Japan, the original recordings, still officially unreleased  in there, remained safely under U.S. and / or European copyright.

Of course the Japanese — and the Chinese, and the Indians, and the Koreans, and the Vietnamese, and the Thais, and the Filipinos, and the Malaysians (not to mention the entire Middle East) — pirated the ever-luvin’ s4!t outta everything, but those original copyrights remained sacrosanct.

Conversely the Europeans, in particular the French, took a much more respectful view of copyright re creators’ rights.  Creators might sell rights to their work, but that didn’t give the new owner carte blanche to do as they saw fit with it, nor could they profit off it without kicking something back to creators and / or heirs.

They also stuck an extremely lengthy term of protection on copyright:
The life of the creator/s plus 70 years before it becomes public domain.[2]

At first this seems like a fair idea, but it actually works against both the original creator and the culture at large.

At a certain point, ideas, characters, concepts, stories, and techniques need to be “released into the wild” to be used by the culture at large in such a way as to build off of them, to expand humanity’s cultural capital.

We do not forbid people the right to use vanishing points in their paintings simply because Filippo Brunelleschi pioneered the technique 700 years ago.

Likewise, a still living creator is not harmed if a work remains popular even after falling into P.D.

If anything, it’s continuing popularity only further promotes the creator’s work and career.

Irving Berlin lived long enough to see
Alexander’s Ragtime Band” fall into public domain.
Some how I don’t think he missed any meals because of this.

But with soulless amoral corporations using their ungodly influence to guarantee more and more money for themselves, we now see ourselves in a media environment where there is no protection for the smaller creator.

If you don’t already have millions to prevail against an opponent in court, you won’t get any millions.

Q.E.D.

At the same time we can acknowledge that the corporations have spent a lot of time and capital promoting their characters, concepts, et al., to the public; it is neither unfair nor unreasonable for them to expect some return on their investment.

But when a corporation is the bogus “creator of record” for a work or character, when does said work enter the public domain?  When the corporation is sold off (if ever)?  But then the property is usually sold to another corporation, and the cycle begins anew.[3]

Copyright, as it exists today, is much too long.  It needs to be limited to a more reasonable period, say 50 years at which point it enters the public domain.

Corporations (viz. Burroughs and Disney and Lucas) frequently hold trademarks on specific character designs; unlike copyrights, trademarks are forever (or at least until abandoned).[4]

It would not be unfair to allow trademark holders the privilege of being able to advertise their product as the “official” version, while still allowing earlier versions to fall into the public domain & fair usage provided such works were noted as “unofficial”.

Such unofficial versions would not dent a major corporation’s revenue stream.  For one thing, if a corporation thought they’d make a buck off something, they’d do it:  Convention sketches, fan films, slash fiction, etc., clearly aren’t worth their effort.[5]

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[1] This explains the huge number of “Live At Budokan” albums.

[2] For a specific recording of a specific performance, copyright only extends 50 years, even though the underlying source material may stay in copyright much, much longer.  One could not remake a European film from 1960, for instance, without paying the original writer and director though one could show the original film without reimbursing them.

[3] The irony, of course, is that rarely does a P.D. work bring the new packager any significant reward unless and until a new creative spin has been put on the material; viz. West Side Story / Romeo & Juliet.

[4] Burroughs has trademarked the image of a nearly-naked-clean-shaven-white-guy-in-a-loin-cloth as Tarzan, even though the original books are falling into public domain.  Try making a Tarzan movie based on a P.D. book, however, and you will find ERB Inc. lawyers swarming over your creative assets.  One wonders if a drastic redesign / re-imagining of Tarzan would escape such legal scrutiny, say a naked bearded version of the character, or one where he wears some modified form of jungle fatigues.  Likewise, many of the earliest Mickey Mouse comic strips are now public domain; what if one filmed them in live action with human actors?  Points to ponder…

[5] Paramount Pictures and Lucasfilm and Stephen King have long since learned the wisdom of letting fans make films based on their properties so long as they don’t make money off it.  Good or bad, the final product only promotes the Star Trek / Star Wars / Stephen King brand, so essentially it’s free advertising.

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True Story, Grace Will Bear Me Out: Tumbleweeds

15/01/2012

The redoubtable Charles Brubaker passed along this YouTube link to the one & only episode of T.K. Ryan’s Tumbleweeds comic strip ever animated & aired.

I bring this to your attention because:

  1. I was (& still am) a big fan of the Tumbleweeds strip
  2. I wrote this particular episode
  3. We animated & aired it without the knowledge or permission of Mr. Ryan

How can you do such a thing?  Easy, if you’re Filmation Studios…

Well, that’s my topic of the day…

Filmation in 1978 was my first writing gig in Hollywood.  I had been hired after luckily knocking on the right door at the right time & put to work on a show that had the dubious distinction of being cancelled even before the first episode was completed.

Nevermind, there was other stuff to do.

After writing several segments of the Tarzan And The Super 7 series[1], I was moved over to another show:  The Fabulous Funnies[2].

Frankly, it was a lousy idea for a show.  Almost all the comic strips they selected were old & anemic even at that time; I couldn’t imagine any kid being interested in them.

There were two exceptions:
Broom-Hilda, which at 8 years of age was the newbie in the pile, and Ryan’s Tumbleweeds, which began in 1965.

I’d been reading Tumbleweeds since junior high and had the first paperback collection.  While somewhat extreme in its stylization, it had a sly, savage wit and cartoonist T. K. Ryan filled it up with a cast of memorable eccentric characters, each a delightful off-beat take on Western cliches.

Naturally, I glommed onto Tumbleweeds the moment I was assigned to the show, eager to make full use of its wide range of characters and situations.

Only one problem:  The budget was so small we could only afford 4 voice actors on the show.

And to make matters worse, we weren’t allowed to use any of the Indian characters because the network would let us record their voices with non-Native American actors and at the time the only Native American actor anybody in Hollywood knew was Iron Eyes Cody[3], who was waaaaaaay too expensive for Filmation.

Fortunately there was a workaround for the Indian situation.  Two of the strips recurring Native American characters — Lotsa Luck and Bucolic Buffalo — were mute.  Further, in the strip Lotsa Luck communicated by scribbling notes for other characters to read, so I was able to secure permission from the network to use them.

The person whom we didn’t secure permission from was T. K. Ryan.

It seems Filmation sold the idea of the show to the network without first formally securing the rights to any of the comic strips.

Once the series was picked up, Filmation’s lawyer then went to the various strips & picked up the rights.  Most of the rights were granted through syndicates, but Ryan personally held all rights to Tumbleweeds.

So Filmation’s lawyer contacted Ryan and told him Filmation was interested in doing a Tumbleweeds segment of The Fabulous Funnies and Ryan said he’d like to see a storyboard first so he could tell if we knew how to handle his characters and Filmation’s lawyer said sure and then he called the producer and told him Ryan was okay with the idea.

So I started writing.

I was disappointed to learn there were only going to be four Tumbleweeds segments but I was determined to make the best of them.  The first was the short segment seen above, a brief intro to the characters and setting before getting ito the real character comedy.

So I wrote it and it was storyboarded and animated and produced and aired.

And the following Monday Filmation got a call from Mr. Ryan’s lawer, saying Mr. Ryan liked the episode very much only he wondered why Filmation never bothered to sign a contract with him…

Can you say “Oops!”, boys and girls?[4]

Anyway, long story short, Filmation quickly ponied up and, for reasons I could never fathom, opted to removed Tumbleweeds entirely from the show rather than run the segment again or make new ones.

They even went to the trouble of editing him out of the main titles.

Ryan kept the ‘Weed running for another 30 years, finally signing off in December 2007 in one of the classier endings of a comic strip.

I’m truly sorry we never got a real chance to do something with his characters; they were perfect for animation.

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[1]  Yeah, yeah, I know:  No way is it possible to configure that show & end up with the number 7.  We figured if the network didn’t care, why should we.

[2]  Which was neither

[3]  Trust me, I am deeply appreciative of the irony here…

[4]  I knew you could.

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